Very awesome first attempt
It was nice and dark sounding with a good melody, but it's way to long and doesn't really change. It would have been nice to have that awesome build up you had in the middle to drop into a loud chorus of sorts but it was sort of underwhelming didn't really change up. It's still a great dark tune though.
Oh my, you're true! thanks for comment! I will make new songs and a new version of this.
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